I'm trying to decide if THIS 

is finished 

& I don't think it is 

BUT 

I'm not sure why I think it isn't finished 

I think I want it to

go DEEPER and

JUMP 

OUT 

MORE 

BUT 

if I block

the top and then the bottom separately 

I'm pretty happy with the 

LOOK 

of the top and then the bottom separately 

SO

I really JUST want 

LIKE 

a LINE

of extreme IN

&

a LINE

of extreme OUT